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heartbreak lullaby

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i.

it wasn't my fault,
his mind was set
and ready to aim.

unable to go see him
or hear his voice,
my words in the form of text
reached out towards him
and discovered the truth.




ii.

he loved her
with all his fragile heart
and wanted me to tell her
for the last time,
"i love you".

four days prior to this,
all i knew about their relationship
was that he really hurt her
and she broke up with him;

but every story has two sides.




iii.

according to her:

he broke her,
used her,
trashed her,
disrespected her,
etc.

according to him:

he screwed up and hurt her
but deep inside,
he still loved her
and wanted a second chance
to prove it to her.




iv.

four days prior,
she broke up with him,
blocked and unfriended him
on Facebook;

she didn't want anything
to do with him anymore.

for four hours that day,
he cried out to me,
saying that she has forgotten about him
and doesn't care about him any longer;

he didn't want to live
without her,
she made his life
complete.




v.

by the end of the night,
the fire engulfed him
and turned his caring heart
into ash.


rest in peace.



vi.

if there's anything that bugs me more,
it's when people throw pity parties for
themselves.

she took some of his personal belongings
and claimed them as her own
because she "lost her soul mate".

doesn't she realize?

he died because his true love for her
outweighed the idea of moving on.

he died because of a heartbreak.
he died because of her.




vii.

being the last one to say something
will remain with me forever.

since she decided we're no longer friends,
i can finally accept that you're gone
at my own pace.

i never did say goodbye,
but i will try to do so
right now
:



good-bye,
Thomas.
Theme #5 - Seeking solace

It's been almost a month... And I am still trying to accept that he's gone :heart: 

Writing IS my solace... :(
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Arthur-Ramsey's avatar
This is a great writing but what Thomas forgot and may none of us make the mistake that others loved him very much. I know its hard in that pain. Above all things each and every one who reads the most important thing to know is that darkness set Thomas up...it had a plan for him and he took the bait.